This is my finished book as a PDF, i am pleased with the outcome so far, intend to continue my book so that is perfected and completed. The full story is also attached to this page.
Category: brief 4
Finished book pages
Adding text ideas
These are some of the examples i looked at to see how they arranged text and what font they used. I found that it’s best to keep it simple so that the children can read them clearly. The text is arranged around the pages though depending on where it is most visible and so i have also done this when adding text to my book.
page 6
This is the final page inside of my book for now until i finish it in my own time. But it shows Larry the sheep talking to lamby about it being okay to be different and that he should embrace it because he too, is different. I think this page also works well because it shows that lamby looks up to Larry. Though again i feel like the layout could’ve been different, although the setting is the same throughout most of the book and it’s more about the story than the scenery.
page 5
This is the 5th page inside my book that shows Lamby sad after being laughed at by the other lambs because he got the colour of their onesies wrong. He is feeling sad because he knows he is different and can’t understand why, he wants to be just like all the other lambs therefore showing that he hasn’t realised that it’s okay to be different. This is one of my favourite pages as you actually feel sad by the drawing i have done of lamby looking really down. I also think the layout works because it looks as though the other lambs are intimidating Lamby. The colours work well together and i have tried to create the idea that there is a main bully by making the other lamb stand behind the other eating grass. If i had more time i would definitely try to play around with the layout more, however for this page i am actually happy with the look so far without text.