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This is the second draft of the Neptune
Page. However I feel that the writing
looks messy and too heavy for a child
to read. The page doesn’t look fun which
is key for a childrens app. The image below
show the second draft up of the page,
the text is bigger and position at the bottom to
make the page look a little less cluttered
however, I still feel like there is too much negative space though.
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This is my first draft of the Neptune page for the App. I put a tab bar down the side of the page as oppose to the top as most apps have a drop down menu. I then placed Neptune towards the top of the page so that I could place the writing underneath. I also placed a bar along the bottom of the app to put Einstein on and the planet, I did this to create the idea that you can press Einstein for him to read out the writing to you and you can press Neptune to take the user back to the home page. However I feel that the page layout isn’t very exciting and looks quite boring. The name of the planet isn’t displayed either which can cause confusion.